Tuesday, 23 September 2014

Learning to write an adjective poem.


I have been learning to use adjectives to add detail and expression to my writing.  I found this activity fun because I liked finding out the adjectives. My next step with using adjectives is to use more adjectives.

Thursday, 4 September 2014

Learning to write a bio poem.



We were looking at bio poems and we had a go at writing our own. I enjoyed writing my bio poem because I liked thinking of ideas.

Wednesday, 20 August 2014

Learning to use different language features.

I use a hook in my writing so people go wow and want to read my story.  For my story about my lava lamp, I used onomatopoeia to make my reader interested.  I thought it was tricky was someone bothered me all the time because he is my friend.  My next step is to think of good wow words.